I managed to progress the assignment to a stage where all information and visuals were included. We used a similar critiquing exercise to gain additional feedback on our mock-ups and our feedback received was mostly in regard to layout of images and type, whereas the content itself was working well.
It was valuable to get feedback on different potential ways of laying out the pages as well as people telling us what areas they had struggled to read or decipher, or what parts of the project weren't as strong.
This helped us to determine that our visual system needed some improvements and the text needed more hierarchy. We also discussed adding a few additional images to strengthen some of the information.
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| Mock-up (Client Page) |

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